Comments : Your eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Awesome poem haii i love poems that are dedicated to people and its very nice that u did this for ur friend

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I liked htis. It is a nice tribute. I think that it could of been longer. The emotion was deep && I could feel your sympathy and admiration towards her. Great job!


  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    You pretend that all is fine
    Yet you wait for your sign

    so sad

    i liked it so much

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good poem haii, the flow tis perfect, capitalize the "a" in the 4th line, i give this a flawless 5/5!!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nightmare Fiend

    I liked this alot it was very sad and emotional and how you just said it mad it very beautiful. 5/5