Comments : Our Love Faded Along With The Street Lights...

  • 12 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    It was painful for me to read so i cant imagen how you feel! i am very sorry! but this poem is really great!

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oooo... holy crap.
    M'dear, you have amazed me once more. :]] This was so sad and so heartbreaking. :/ I hope it's not true. The flow was flawless and the emotions were deep. [Marvelous] job!

    "I hate going to sleep because I know your in my dreams
    Yet, I am the first to go to sleep [every] night."

    ^^^ Those lines were so sad, yet sweet. They made my heart flutter. :]] Amazing job. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph <33

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh wow ... this is something I could truly relate with. The power and meaning here just left me ... amazed. It reminds me of that song "Hate that I love you" Sometimes you cannot help who you love and even if they do not turn out to be what you expected, your heart is still occupied by them. I truly loved the last two lines of your last stanza. It was a perfect way to end the poem.

    "I hate going to sleep because I know your in my dreams"
    ^I think you mean "you're"

    I truly enjoyed this piece. *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think I'm definately going to have to favourite this poem. It was so fantastic in every single way, the word choice and the flow were absolutely perfect. Just by reading your words I can think back and remember a time I felt like this, nothing hurts as bad,but nothing tastes as sweet as love. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • 12 years ago

    by justeene

    Great poem very intriguing kept me interested, keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow, amber.
    you did a wonderfffffuuul job with this poem.
    I love it, and can completely relate to it. Lol.

    It's amazing how much you 've improved since I first started reading your poems. (:

    I'm proud of you. (:
    hehe.

  • 12 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow i can really relate this is a great poem i loved the emotion and the feeling it gave off great job me likey!!! 5/5

    laura

  • 12 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This poem is EXACTLY how my life is like. therez this guy. that i absolutely LIVE for. but he doesnt love mehh like i love him. && it fillz my soul with sorrow. && it fillz my eyes with tears everyday. i know how you feel. this poem was very well written && i absolutely love it. 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    "Hell, even the stars lie to me these days..." What a simple line, yet with powerful meaning. I really enjoyed this poem and thought it was excellent, although I wish to understand your intention by putting certain words in [brackets]. Overall, great job though!

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was such a beautiful piece. Honestly I fell for it deeply. The emotions you portrayed were painful and hit my heart. I liked the flow, it didn't go off track at all. I liked the sarcasm you contrasted with sadness it was powerful. "Hell, even the stars lie to me these days..." That line was capturing. I'm not so sure why you have brackets around words. It might be just your little thing but it doesn't effect the poem what so ever.

    A great poem filled with so much emotion. Simple word choice yet so effective. Overall a great read. Well done. ~Mel

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany

    Breathtaking. Absolutely breathtaking. I can completely (once again) relate. There's a beautiful desperation to it that draws sympathy from the reader, and forces them to be hit with the emotions you're feeling. Very powerful.
    5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by krystal

    Amazing, there are lots of people who feel the same way. i know i have 5/5
    <333

  • 12 years ago

    by IfYouWantMe

    This is a beautiful poem!! I really enjoyed reading it...you have alot of talent!!

    **Sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by katy

    This was so emotional i reli do like this poem, wow it was so powerful so beautiful, and i felt ur pain so well, i loved it xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Tiffany

    It was really emotional and heartbreaking!

    I loved it!!

  • 12 years ago

    by UNDER WHAT CIRCUMSTANCE

    I love this poem it so sad but breath taking... the lines
    "...I hate admitting to myself that my heart is still yours;
    But it wouldn't be quite fair if I lied, now would it?..."
    this part just made me think that i still can't get over my ex bcuz he was my first and only. and u cant just forget about ur first rite. anyway keep it up and like i said i love the poem.!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow i can rele relate to this poem in a way..... u had a line that said

    I know no difference between truth and dishonesty;

    it said i know no...i think u meant to put i NOW no...commen mistake...but anways very good poem and it had great meaning in it!!! keep it up!!! <3

    <3 i love you silly

  • 12 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I lOVE this poem.. its amazing.. its such an enjoyable poem to read because of the simple words and flawless flow.. the emotions are strong and the word choice is put together very nicely.. i especially love the last line it ends the poem with perfection

  • 12 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this poem is really powerful and amazing!.. I can relate to every line in this poem because I went through the same exact thing.. and still haven't gotten through it 100% Excellent job writing about the way you feel and making it sound so amazing. Nice job. Keep it up! =)

  • 12 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    I feel this way right now..

    your good. start rhyming ur poems..

    read some of mine :)

    ulll likee

    xx