This was a very captivating poem.
It was interesting and mind opening.
The content was brilliant and the message was amazing.
And the stanzas were brilliant.
Good work =)
5/5.

The thing i hate most is when people act like something thet are not. great job another well expressed poem full of meaning and thought 5/5

Hell

I can't stand fake *** people. Why be fake the only person there lying to is therselves...another ....5/5 great job......=)!!!!!!

I like this one.. i was goin through something just like this, but it took me a good friend to make me see this. hope this poem reaches out to ppl.. love it

There is a lot of truth in this piece.
i would say people should stop being shallow.
and stop judging everyone else.
but truth is, everyone judges.
nowadays, it's become automatic.
and sometimes, we dont even realize it.
Because, when you think about it,
first impression are important, why?
Because the person is judged once met.
anyway great write. 5/5.

This poem really caught my attention. It's got such energy, passion and feeling to it. These were my favorite lines:

"JUST BE YOURSELF!
you will go so much farther!
do you see? "