Comments : Drunken Hearts

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    That was an interesting poem, i liked it, it was different

    happy holidays
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    Open your heart and let me in,
    because without you i cant live.
    Boy you know your my world,
    just give it time to show.
    Babe i felt so alone,
    and it wasnt hard to know.

    WOW! i love this part of the poem great work! =)

    Constance

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow, that was a joy to read, i thouroghly enjoyed that, nice use of words, i could see the message you were getting across in your poem, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    I love your poems so much, rereading them is the best. :P