Ah to be free......once but never again can we. Its good your capable of writing of many thoughts and emotions.

This is the third poem I've read by you, and I've become entranced ^_^
Thank you, and I'll keep close by *favorites*

Bravo!!!
The power of this piece is amazingly portrayed. It's deep core is filled with so breath-taking emotions and the way that you wrote it is just outstanding. I don't want to repeat myself but mixed imagery and expressed emotions left fascinated impression on me.

Wonderful
...again the words...flawless
I don't know where you get your vocab from
...but it's just amazing
your flow was good as well
5/5
kaila

Basically its the verbs and adjectives that make it so lovely. Its kinda deep, but if you read it slow you can understand what its about. It has a slower pave, which is fine. Its very well written and i like it.

Wow. Your work never ceases to amaze me. Each one I read from you is better than the last because you keep improving which is amazing. It goes without saying that your word choice was superb and the way you fit words together into phrases is flawless. I don't know much else to say because you work is so hard to critque because there is never anything wrong with it. I couldnt find a fave line because it all just blew me away. Well done *5/5*