You need to use proper grammar and punctuation. It will make you poem a lot easier to read, and put a bit of structure to it, that helps readers understand your thought pattern and flow.
It would be brilliant if this was in stanzas, but it's not necessary.

Now to the actual poem.

It was very well done. I can totally relate to the situation you described. You admitted to past weakness which is admirable, but defended yourself and displayed a strength that had been hiding, just waiting to break the surface. The assertiveness is absolutely enpowering.
Keep it up!!
4/5.

This is really good.. it kept my intrests. im sure there r many people who feel this exact way..im one of them lol.. but i liked this alot

Really nice one

with some modifications, it's gonna be awesome

good luck

Thx!

"dont need a man to make me happy" girl thats right a lot of girls get confused on that.thinking that they have to have somebody believe it's not a must.you should make that into a quote because that line is so true!!.....=)