Comments : Here i come

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I like this! I think we've all started off this way. Love your forms of expression. Keep writing!! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by KATIE

    KEEP UR HEAD!..THIS WAS SHORT BUT GOOD!

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Whooa, good choice of the word u put out. THIS IS GREAT. U are good!

  • 16 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    That's one thing you have in common with the rest of us weirdos on this site- we're all 'poets!!'
    But seriously now, I liked it. It was a rushed stanza mimicing the rush of emotions as you descovered the pen. Thanks for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    Thanx for the comment..have a goodnite,baby
    i only write whats real,u know

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Again, simply brilliant.....i guess tats how all of us started out :)
    thanks for the comment :)
    keep writing :)