I love how your always so open to new poetry forms, you write them so well so I look forward to reading many more different styles from you. The sadness portrayed throughout this piece gripped my heart deeply capturing me and dragging me in with each line. This poem was flawless with vivid imagery painted into my mind as if it was oil on canvas. A gorgeous poem again by you.
Oh and i'm glad you liked my sonnet, seeing as I wanted to write them because of how beautiful yours always turn out :)
I'm so glad you requested for us to read this poem because I loved it! The choice of words.. wow, amazing! I fell in love with this piece, the entire thing was wonderful. The flow was smooth and you didn't lose me once. The paragraphs were very neat and organized like a professional. Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3