Give Me Tonight

by FridusBlueheaven   Nov 26, 2007


Title : Give Me Tonight
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

That I've never been so good to be your man
When you needed me, I never gave you my hand
I know I've been wrong, this is a consequence
But give me tonight, give me one more chance

That I've always suffocated your beautiful day
When you needed someone aside, I never stay
It's all getting wrong but I can't show you the way
Please give me tonight and I'll make it all okay

That I've always been in that wrong direction
And then I keep asking you about your cognition
But I'll be changed and now I'm in a big mission
Then give me tonight, I'll show you love emotion

That I've hurt you from time to time you're with me
I'm such a fool and too much messing your naivety
Done with bad situation, can't take the responsibility
Oh give me tonight because I need to make you see

That I've never given all the best that I could do
Gave you my promises but I never make them true
But what I truly feel deep in my heart, I bet you knew
So give me tonight cause this heart is all about you

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This poem was very sweet
    although i think it would sound way better without you starting lines with the word "That"
    it bothered me a lot, i didnt think it sounded correct.
    but other than that.
    very good
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Men

    The person whom this poem was meant for is very lucky.

    Now that that's out of my head: Pros and Cons.

    Of course this maybe your style of writing and that this is just an opinion, your transition from stanza to stanza is lacking.

    Otherthan that you've seem to master the rhythm and flow of poetry as well as rhyming.

    Good Job

    ^Men^

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Gosh you write the most wonderful poems!!! this is so far my fave......that ive read so far keep it up!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Who ever you wrote this poem for is so lucky this poem is cute aww i love the last stanza ...great job!!...=)!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow how sweet.. i can see how u sincere all what u expressed in this poem nice one

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