Dear My Girl

by Ical   Nov 26, 2007


Dear my girl,
I never meant to be this way
Since I know my world was grey
I keep asking why to my heart
How could this love ever start?

Dear my girl,
I wrote you this letter
It doesn't mean an over
But maybe a new beginning
To me you're my everything

Dear my girl,
Could we make a brand new day
Would you be here and just stay
I really really want to know
And I never want to let you go

Dear my girl,
Could I make this dreams come true?
That I wanna be with you
Heal me from every pain
Just make me stronger again

Dear my girl,
If I'm not the one that you see
Could you still be the friend of me?
Cause I don't want our friendship ends
Hope that you will understand

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    A nice poem with sincere meaning and written with good emotion; however, the rhyme scheme at the end was a little off...I'm not sure how you meant that. Anyways I see a lot of potential. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Awww.. this was pretty good! i liked it, it had a sweet message to it. Some of the rhyming kinda seemed outta place, but then some of it was really good and fit. great work! so keep it up! :D