A lovely poem and very unique from other poems on this site. I was a little confused that the third stanza seemed to be trying to rhyme but I don't think that was the point of it. Anyways, a nice collaboration, I really admire it! Nice work!

I liked this poem alot. Joe and you are both amazing writers so a collab coming from you two was touching and breath taking. An elegant yet delicate piece which I adored very much. The topic was different for me which I enjoyed. It's good to find original poems these days.

A nice poem which I give you a 5/5 for. Well done. ~Mel

This was a nice poem.
It was serene, the kind of feeling you image you'd feel after finding that one person you're meant to be with.
Well done to you and you're partner.
5/5.