Wow, this is so powerful! I love it! Whole poem is excellently written and so original. Great piece from the beginning to the end, with so effective descriptions. I like your choice of words and the atmosphere that you created.
My favorite stanza is:

-Let me bleed my tears,
Into your heart,
As bullets rip our worlds apart
And then we ll start,
With my hopes and fears,
Oh I tried so hard,
I bled for hours, I ran so far,
To wind up here.-
^^^
The repetition of this part through the poem is truly effective.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

I agree, very strong words and extremely effective. Exellent!

It is totally extrmely effective! You're so good, those each stanza are killing it! Strong words making it GOOD!!!!