Beauty and sadness majestically intertwined through the whole piece... truly precious piece of love poetry, deeply touching and filled with excellently expressed emotions. I like your descriptions- the imagery that you created is truly vivid and captivating.
The ending is also very effective, it rounds the whole poem greatly.
My favorite lines are:
-I'll paint you a picture, with the brush I have made.
The piece of my soul, that - for you- has remained.-
wow... love those!
This... is beautiful.
The way you expressed yourself so metaphorically and emotionally is mind blowing. The flow is so flawless and the rhyming isn't too basic and not forced at all. The title is capturing and again, this is very beautifully written.
This is going on my favourites. :] Excellent piece, I must read more of yours. 5/5
I really loved this poem, thank you for writting it so beautifuly =]
The flow was excellent and the choice of wording was brilliant, Your an amazing writter! Great job!
I also loved the thought put into this piece, Its definitely one of the best iv'e seen on here in a while =]
The emotion you put into that was phenominal, I liked how you devoted it to a group of lost lovers... I also really liked the little piece of personification (If thats the right word) you put into it: the painting, brush, paint ect.
Very well-constructed piece. You write with detailed and specific imagery that is right on. I know I haven't been around in a while but I'm thinking of coming back to writing even though my stay here was brief as it was before. Nice to see you're still writing.