Sam
What a deep and intense piece. Love can do many things to us.

For to me, she is but the sweetest drug that holds all my attention,
without this intoxicating substance I am forever bound.. my addiction

Seems the less we have the more we want it.
Imagery and word choiceis great.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Sam,
Wow. How bound we are by the magic word. We hate that we are addicted but are definitely in love with the pain of it. This was a very powerful write, and very full of very tense, deep emotions. You have done a great job with conveying the feelings of helplessness in this situation.
~Kay

Awww....it's sweet but also well put. Really sounds like he's addicted to her and that she's intoxicating in every part of his life. The rhyming was good and different because you didn't really hear your everyday easy rhymes. So that was nice too!
*ME*

Sam,

At least you have got to thank her for one thing...she inspires you to make beautiful poetry!

Beautiful as always,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow very well written I love this. Great work keep it up. 5.5

This poem is one of the best ive read, nice work =]