I Wish on You

by Kay   Nov 28, 2007


I wish you could make me laugh, like you can make me cry,
I wish you could make me happy, like you can make me die,
I wish it were all easier,and I wish you came around,
I wish you could make me smile, instead of just a frown,
I wish I didn't love you, and that you couldn't break my heart,
But with each passing mintue, I cry cos were apart.
Someday I won't love you, someday I won't care,
But until then, I'll be wishing you were there.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MyEscape

    But until then, i'll be hurting in dispair.

    because your whole poem is about wishing he was different or wishing he was gone, I was going to suggest changing this last line to

    "but until then, I'll be wishing you were there."

    But that's just a suggestion. The beginning was very strong and well put and I liked that it was different from your everyday broken hearted poem. So good job!
    *ME*

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