Excellent! I love it.

Keep the good work up.

5/5

Convincing herself she is not alone
In this messed up world
Even though she is gone
^^^
Wow remarkable stanza!

Whisper to me
Be by my side
Plain and simple just hold me
Just while I cry
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This stanza screams "pain" so loudly it runs chills through my veins.

After reading and re-reading this piece I really think it would make for a great song .... with a little addition lines added in here and there.

No, I won�t let my life crumble
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a little system errors in this part, in case you didn't notice.

Nice read, well done
Luanne