I loved that one i feel the same at the moment :[

This was really good :)
4/5 =D
keep writing you have alot of potental :)

Excellent poem. so much feeling and deapth

I love it, its so full of emotion!
The last Line is my fav.
"I Bleed My Endless Tear"
Its awesome!
5/5

Great entrance ~

MY EMOTIONS WERE HIDDEN BENEATH THE TRUTH
A WHILE AGO SO I DINT HAVE TO FEEL THE THING'S I FEAR TO FEEL
OR RE LIVE MY OWN FOOTSTEPS AS IF A HALLOW SHADOW IN MY MOMENTS OF TORTURE

It's very climatic. 5/5, nice poem. Keep on writting.