This is really good. =] I absolutely lurrvveedd it. <3

I don't see why this got a 4. You were very detailed, descriptive and direct with your writing. It had an amazing flow. I can't even describe it. 5/5

Very nice flow to it and very detailed you definatly deserve a 5 not a 4....brilliant job

5/5

: ) i loved it!!!! it had a good sense of mystery where you kept me reading just to know the ending of it you did an amazzin job hunny 5/5 keep up the great work! <33

What I am reading is that one guy made her ill...am I right?
Good flow, well done, dear!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid