Wow kaz, thts brilliant.. i luv it :) i wish my friends here wrote lik tht... great job!!

Brilliant

It almost brought me tears..can relate to it vry ell..
grt wrk done...

Oh my, thats wonderful. keep up the great work!. muah!

Kaz...i just want to say that tis poem you wrote is....AWSOME!! omfg,wow...reading it i felt som of your emotions when you wrote this i think youretter then me, ll i like to writ is sensual things and dark poes but wow ill give this a high 5/5!! comgrats!!

This is awesome

Reaaaaalllly it is gorgeoussss... goodddd jobbbbb :) keeeep it up okayyyy :))))

The few steps I took forward,
Just to lose you,
Now I take many more backwards,
Just to be with you,
Landing at that same line I started from,
Truth lies in front of me,
Mind accepts the fact,
Heart rejects it more,
I want to lose her,
but I want her more..

Wow ! beautiful ... simply beautiful ! Well done & beautifully written 5/5