Sights and Sounds

by Bogie   Dec 2, 2007


The sun rising lights the way,
sights and sounds forever play.

Steady pounding ocean waves,
a beating bass drum enslaves.

Leafs fluttering do combine,
cymbals ringing all in time.

River rage through harmony,
trumpets blow in symphony.

Motionless humming bird flies,
a peaceful voice singing sighs.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    The rhytm sometimes stops it from reading easily ,and "thru" should have been written "through"
    apart from the critics : the rhyming did work quite well on this poem , and the fact that all sentences were equally -7 stllables- long, made it an enjoyable read
    good poem :)
    keep it up

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