Amazing poem! Such heart wenching emotions.I just really wish you never had to go though this pain.Its got amazing vocabulary and I barely realized the lengh,It was capturing my imagination so well.A 5/5 as always. =)
Keep writing,
Rado

Elaine! You brought me to tears again hun >.< I swear.. you are absolutely amazing whenever it comes to poetry. No wonder you're on my favorites list =P You rock my dear! Once again, I could picture every single line in my head. Have you ever considered writing stories? I'm sure you'd be wonderful at it! Poems that this one proves it! You better keep it up girlie! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

This was quite an enjoyable read. Long but not boring what so ever, you kept my attention throughout it. This was story like to me, Prose even. I liked it none the less and found it to grasp my attention.

"How could you ever think you could compare to her!, she's beautiful, A rose any man would
kill to posses.

Them lines touched me deeply. They are the ones that stood out to me. Quite capturing. Intriguing and emotion packed. I loved your word choice you have a nice vocab some parts simple and effective some stronger and powerful. Overall this was such an enjoyable read which you do deserve a 5/5 from me. Well done keep up the great work. ~Mel

This poem was full of passion and i felt the words like i've read it before.nice choice of words.very poetic.

~shattered dreams~

WOW. By far, the best so far! I honestly think this is the best thing I've read all day long...and I've been reading ALL DAY LONG!
I liked the fact that it was sort of a scene of a play..it showed nothing but great emotion. It was like I was actually feeling the feelings of the girl in the poem...WOW
Perfect and Beautifully written
5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

I am not usually much for poems that don't rhyme but OMG you totally pulled this off in my eyes. I could never do this to someone! You really conveyed your emotions through your words and I could feel that which was kinda weird from thew womans point of view because I'm not use to that... but Greta poem 5/5

Again I don't see a structure here really at all. I think it would be nice if you added short story because most people think it's a poem and in my opinion it doesn't have the structure to fit the poem criteria.

The structure here seemed to be off, and for this poem, I don't think it worked as well in comparison to your other one. However, I did really like the strong emotion created in this piece.

"He stood before her guilt clear in his eyes as he did not answer her frantic pleas."
^^ I think you should put a comma in after 'her' and 'eyes'. It would help with the flow. :]

Wow amazing ending

it really all told an amazing story of pain and anger

just amazing

Well yeah it look more a story then a poem , but i like the chain of event and expressions

Wow the emotions you expressed here were so deep and captivating. I just adored the story you told me because it was filled with meaning and power. Nice choice of words to describe the events. Well done *5/5*