This was amazing ... it flowed as if someone was rapping it to me. It was flawless in its beautiy and the truth behind it was wonderful. Well done *5/5*

Those last lines sound really close to something my best friend always says :)

Something about your poetry gives me so much inspiration, I think it is the meaning and truth behind them. You explain things nicely throughout your poems expressing things deeply and holding a touch of beauty. You flowed this together nicely and it had a enchanting elegant rhyme. Well done. This was beautiful. Keep on writing so I can keep on reading your magical poems. ~Mel

Very beautiful, kept you reading and had a powerful meaning, well written and very true... not many you can truely trust in this world--tara