Comments : Dream

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh that was so sweet.... very couraging piece! those lines seems so sincere and perfectly well expressed! there are some lines i can truly relate for a moment 5/5 keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    5/5 its great. I feel like I was right there with you as you where trying to put your thoughts on paper. Working out what you thought was wrong and still having somthing to look forword to. It brings me back to my teenage years.