Ohhh yeah if there is pain there is also happiness.... that was so true. everyone goes in that situation though, well great one and u had expressed well. fabulous 5/5

I like the entire poem but what really stood out was the last paragraph. i loved it a lot and i think this should win the contest.amazing read. 5/5 !props!

Yea that is the simple life of love and hate ^__^ well im loved the poem

Well the I have never seen a structure like this before. (2 word each line)

Well it's good to read something new, good job!
Anyway I think to improve this poem you should add some punctuations.

I hope that you win the contest :)