Comments : Lost Love

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a sad write. You have described your memories so well.

    Michael

    p.s if you structured this piece it would improve greatly! Just an idea?

  • 15 years ago

    by msluckyone

    Ty for ur feedback it only makes me better

  • 15 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Really touching
    such lovely and sad poem
    i am sorry for you
    i wish you will find this love again soon

    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Lovely work!! very touching i loved the way you expressed yourself, even though it didnt rhyme, it felt more like a letter, but it doesnt need any of that when it comes from the heart =] job well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by oldthings

    I relate, that was very emotional. i love your justification for it not being obsession, thats true, i llike that a lot. you may not forget the people you loved first but you do fall in love with others, this was sweet and emotional, good job