I really liked this one.
its really short but it explains though.
you cant live without this person.
they keep you save.
but if they went away you wouldnt know what to do

it sounds like that.
or some what. :]
very well done.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Don't be addicted to love.

you gotta love yourself.

good poem.

Wow this poem is really well written
o and thanks for the comment

-punnk_rockr

I cn totaly relate ~
5/5

Well done hun even though the poems short it's really powerful! the last stanza is my favourite. keep up the good work xx

I love it ~~ like alot !!! you should comment my poems

This poem is realy good 5/5

Short but sweet. i like this poem alot! great job. :D

Nice poem .i .llove the poems that i read from you your a good poet

This is really good. Gave me goosebumps.
Good job, amazing job, keep it up, whoot
-Krystal.

I loved this 2....your 2 hard on yaself mate...truly.....

I like it, short and sweet works

Aw....i love dis poem so much it ade me realisie sumthin..
keep it up!!!
hope u read mines!

Wow, this poem was created in such a unique way. I really liked it! I had to reread it a few times though to get the meaning.. but nontheless, it was great. Keep writing, thank you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Another great job! I know it is hard but try to learn to live and be happy for you and the hell with everyone else! 5/5

I really like this one. :)

That is wonderful...Was that a tribute to your wife?? It sounded sweet like you envied her life because she lives it so well.....*I'm not sure if that makes much sense....but anyway it was a great poem!!>>>
Krissy.