The worthy recipient of your gorgeous depth does exist....

^He'd -better- be worthy. That's all I have to say.

This is cherishable, Lovely. What you're describing is one of those things that simply seems too precious to voice. (And yet you have, and it's ok that you have. You know? You know.)

So deep yet so light it touches like a feather! A beautiful write you express and see things that so many miss! I'm not pissing in your pocket, I enjoyed this immensely!!

Nicko

You know this truly soft, I think you have a special way with wording.
you used simple words and long ones then made a beautiful mixture to portray a very very nice image.

Just felt a sweet wise sensation between ur lines.
I would only suggest that ur very 1st lines need some commas , nothin imp at all..its still flowing well with thoughts.
But wen i write a free verse I try to pay attention for that cause it eases the flow.

loved this poem
5/5

Great poem.