by Kittens Poems Dec 17, 2007
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Love, romance /
i love you
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We walked through the park |
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Thank you paul.. I appreciate it |
by MyEscape
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Good job on the flow and rhyme. i think your last line is a tad cliche...but other than that, it was easy to follow and well-written. We've all felt those pangs of heartache before. |