Wow! I really, really loved every line, so descriptive and emotional. It is just amazing that you are capable to write masterpiece like this one.
This piece is totally impressing, captivating and breath-taking. I enjoyed so much in it and it is somehow inspiring. Well done!

Ohhh love and how dark you portrayed it. This was sweet in a darkly corrupted way. Your word choice created a mysterious love effect and left me picturing darkness with a pink glowing heart in it. My mind is kind of odd. I know. I liked the structure. Really different and unique but then again you've always created your poetry with different structures still maintaining a nice flow throughout it too. I just couldn't pick a favorite stanza. It's all beautiful in its own way. Romantic with passion combined also holding an elegant factor. Throughout my atmosphere you created a dark lovers piece which swept me away into the clouds with each line. Amazing. Outstanding and venomously interesting. Well done. Yet again another masterpiece. ~Mel

Wondeful vocabulary
it was an excellent poem
the mood was good and suttle
I loved it
5/5
kaila

Another amazing poem with excellent wording and brilliant descriptions.

Very nice words, beautiful visions, it was great

So I'm like mesmorized with the way you write. Seriously, I'm not sure what to say - some times you read a poem and have nothing to say about it. I say this because some times I feel as though I'm not really "qualified" to give my two cents...HAHAHAHA I stuggle with poets like you becasue my poetry is so simple...I write how I talk...

Simply amazing...I love the dark love!!!

"Red-eyed princess cries tears of pearly regrets" I like this!!! Masjestic Darkness!!!! YES!!!! lol :)

Nice write!!!!

You have amazing vocabulary, but the way you use it is simply beautiful.

I like how you repeated solemnly frigid twice in the first and last stanza, and the punch line "my immortal" was flat in the middle. I thought that was a nice set up.

I hope to read more of your well thought out poetry soon!

-tia