Comments : The bravest Men I Know

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    I wanted to cry..this is so true and such a good poem.More people need to read this poem and understand a little part of what Soldiers,marines,and wtvr go through.good work

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Such an amazing poem. It's so honest and so pure. This stanza is a bit confusing:

    "The Bravest Men I Know
    I have touched
    hugged
    and laughed"

    Maybe you could say laughed with.. But I think if you clear that up it will make the whole poem flow better.

    What also confused me was the capitalization of the line "The Bravest Men I Know". I don't know if it was just a subconsious kind of thing or if you did it to make the line stand out more..

    But other than that the poem was great. Good job and keep up the great work. 5/5 from me.