The gloominess of this poem though it ends with a faithful line captivated me and tore my heart.

Such lines prove that we can convey through poetry what books can't tell with same effect.

however, if you work on rhyming a little bit, you gonna be marvellous.

good luck
Her Guardian

Hmm... this poem deals with a wel lknown subject.. loss..leaving people behind and moving on.. but in a truely original line of thought and analysis.. thats why i love this piiece as a whole.. good work

I love it

Wow another great poem....it also has a niice flow to it....

i can relate to it so i love it even more!!! 5/5