Hey thanks for the comment :D

i really llike this one it flows perfectly except there a a few too/to mixups that you might wanna check out.
other than its a perfect poem!
5/5 for sure

Really its nice poem to read , dats is da love who i was thinking of , keep da good work ;) ,
*Titto*

Nice work.. i was looking at your poetry and just had to comment this 5/5

Noelle Wright

WOW nice job...i just hope ma girl is thinking the same thing..keep it up!! =P rate 10/5

Omg..weird, i can like relate exactly to this poem!
ahh, i love it oh so so much (:

Nice poem! Love how it flows! Great work! :)