Poisinous lover

by LeAndra   Dec 19, 2007


Your eyes are divine they drunken me like wine.
Your lips are poision that kill me softly and sweetly strangle me as you lay them upon my neck.
Your touch is like velvet soft against my skin that arouse my emotions like the clouds calling out to the sun.
Your soft spoken tounge sings me a lullaby of lies and leaves me yearning for more your tender fingertips lie against my skin as if they were a part of me.
Your aroma caresses me like silk sheets and your gracefulness hypnotizes me.
You're like gentle cigar smoke that flows smoothly into my bloodstream.
Your sweet breath whispers sweet nothing into my ears and leaves me speechless.
Your love is like wine but i dare to take a sip.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I liked your use of words and similes, however I had to read it carefully as it had no punctuation and, therefore, didn't flow as well as it could have done. Other than that, very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A great write.
    i really like the imagery.
    i espcieally liked the last line.
    this poem was. .simply amazing.
    5/5.