Death Sentence

by Reapers ZeitGeiSt   Dec 20, 2007


Standing surrounded by void thoughts
Everything seemed simple but everything was new
Nothing shines for me when nothing comes from you
This story was not meant to be in any thickening plots

How could I hurt your feelings when they are for me?
I'll try hard to gain the part that you can give me
I could fall apart thinking that you could leave me
Is this oncoming slavery silently killing me?

Love is a feeling imprisoned by words
The prison cell opens when the words are exposed
When an emotions is expressed,the action is endorsed

If I could show that I love you through a single sentence,
then I would be sentenced to "death"..

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  • 16 years ago

    by mikaella

    I love this,it's a great poem i simply LOVE IT!!!!!! it kept me very very interested !!! lol I commented lol!

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A great write.
    i especially liked the last 2 lines.
    5/5.