Dreaming (not quite finished)

Who says its not finished? seems fine to me. great work and well done, keep writing away

5/5 David

I love it so far. Send me a PM when you finish it so I can read it again! :) 5/5

I agree this is not finished. The poem was beautiful and I want more! Everything you spoke of was easy for me to relate with. I think you can get so deeper into this with your emotions and imagery. *5/5* from me for what you got so far.

This is an interesting poem i like it.... i portrays what every girl fallin in love dreams about. nice job keep it up.
mollie

I thought it was good! Have you fallen in love with a guy you haven't met yet? That happened to me once.