Thats really sad but really good at the same time
nice work <3

One word...WOW!!!! 5/5

Oh,sad experience,but buetiful poem

Wow thats really good i loved it. i guess it kinda reminds me of a guy lol

This poem was amazing.
i love that line:
"there's someone else's lips,
where mine used to be."

keeep writingg (:
laurie.

Well...that was very well written. And the emotion...so sad. But you're never too big to cry.

Well...that was very well written. And the emotion...so sad. But you're never too big to cry.

Well...that was very well written. And the emotion...so sad. But you're never too big to cry.

Yeah you were right i do like this poem but it's very very sad and yeah by i do have to disagree i dont think you ever get to big to cry keeping all of your emotions bottled up isn't good for you. it's really really healthy to cry sometimes! You should do it and then write a poem about it!

( tear tear) : ( look what you did you made me cry! 5/5

Sad but really amazing