You sound like a really good friend...
and im glad to be one of your friends.

Wow that was a beuatiful piece truly,
you really msut care bout the ones you love.
great work once more and keep up this god given talent of yours
take care and God bless
Lisa

Aww wow this is such a sweet and honest piece, which flows realy well...you obviously care so much about everything that it just oozes out of your writing, i loved this piece cos it was just so nice!!!
- ali x

Lost friendship is a great topic. :) Full of emotion that your poem shows subtly, and I like how you display this in a progressive style.

From the fact that you two have separated, up to the fact you're still there for the other person, you lead one thing into another in a smooth and well connected way.

I like your rhythm and general writing style.

It's a good poem, but not amazing. :) Although I liked it, it did take a little effort to focus on it (may just be my brother watching scrubs behind me)...

So I give you a 4/5 saving my 5/5s for poetry that I find truly excellent, whilst yours was just pretty good. :)

In that quiet moment
when you're surprised to find me there;
Just remember even with the distance between us
I am still someone who cares.
-cute

This is an excellent i really got to give you that. You show alot to what you want from that person and you show you made your decission from that. I like your ending to this. It holds a strong stand saying that you still care even if you to went in the sepreat directions. good job 5/5

Girl you deadly, i love the way you word things awh you just make me melt. 5/5

What a beautiful flow of painless sorrow., Though I know the pain was there, It lessens through acceptance of loss and through time The ending shows that the joy once shared still remains you are very smart in your outlook in life A very good write 5/5