I like this poem
its so sweet bu yet tells it all
thanks for commenting mine iv only just started writing so its nice to get some nice comments
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I like this. U r good. ;-)

WOW! thats soo good, i really really like it!! great job!

Thanks Emily :)

Aww!! So much lovely... Damn! I think I'm starting to fall in love with you're poems... This surely goes to my favorites... keep it up... 5/5

This puts a very exciting visual in my mind.
quricks , ya know!! 5/5