Welll.. this is is more prose than poem.. altho uve dealt with ur theme with honesty and emotion.. it wud help if u structure the poem a lil better :)

The meaning of the poet are great but it flowed off but i believe u can make it better coz i understand its just ur starting so keep it up!!

I liked what the poem stood for
My friend and I also went through this
and we both felt what you did at one point
I hope you and your friend get through it
Structure wise
to help get your poem into better shape
you may want to have the same number
of lines in every stanza
make the rhymes more clear
if your going to rhyme
and work on the flow
and the imagery
4/5
nice work
kaila

I like this poem.
the thought/idea of the poem was sweet.
it kinda started out with a nice flow.
but then wandered off. but still.
a good write. :] 5/5 from me.

I view this poem as a 3/5 because i didnt see alot of poem structure, and i felt u held ur emotions back, but i did see that you are trying and i respect that so keep up the good work, nice word choice btw.
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Hmm very inspiring piece! seems really has a deep emotions and very sincere! all the lines was so true and very emotional. keep up the good work and keep on writing all what u feel..5/5

god bless!