"Thinking back to those moments,
When I was carefree and happy.
But those moments died long ago,
& Now I'm a walking tragedy."

O_o. I'm in love with these lines. Simply beautiful. The whole poem was wonderful m'dear. The flow was flawless and the emotions hit the reader's heart. Fantastic job, as always. Overall: 5.5

-- Steph <33

I totally understand your poem. Trust me everything is gonna be okay. keep up the great work

Lovely complex, emotions are just that. Nice job, very nice. It had a good flow and was worded good, 5/5

Wonderful poem!
Full of emotions.
The last stanza was just so good!
Loved reading this one.
Take care

Great poem, full of feeling and emotion. You wrote such powerful words in every line, nice job! A beautiful poem, so keep it up! :)