Comments : Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "Thinking back to those moments,
    When I was carefree and happy.
    But those moments died long ago,
    & Now I'm a walking tragedy."

    O_o. I'm in love with these lines. Simply beautiful. The whole poem was wonderful m'dear. The flow was flawless and the emotions hit the reader's heart. Fantastic job, as always. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Bianca

    I totally understand your poem. Trust me everything is gonna be okay. keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Lovely complex, emotions are just that. Nice job, very nice. It had a good flow and was worded good, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wonderful poem!
    Full of emotions.
    The last stanza was just so good!
    Loved reading this one.
    Take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great poem, full of feeling and emotion. You wrote such powerful words in every line, nice job! A beautiful poem, so keep it up! :)