Comments : Mistakes Shape Us

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    True in some parts. You have an understanding of what you want to write about. Trusting in people can be hard. Sometimes we trust the wrong people, but I think that doesn't mean you should not be open to new people. There are a lot of people who make that mistake.
    I like the ending verses, they really finished up the poem well.
    Liked it a lot.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    I really like your piece..
    it really hit home for me.. im in high school and it sucks.. and the girl part you right on, all it is, is rumors lies and deceite.