It's a nice poem. i liked it though it lost the rhyme in a couple of lines. it relates to me in a way.

it's so sweet

take care

good luck

Nice clear story line, but like she said it lost its flow i a couple places, i still liked it though. I could relate to it. keep up the good work.
mollie

Wow i loved it.
i didn't think it lost flow at all.
this was really good and it showed your emotions a lot.
keep up the good work:)
it was fantastic.<3

---Tay

This is a great poem I realy liked this verse,

You were my first,
The one and only.
You showed me love,
And how to be lonely.

L.S. Moore

The poem is really sweet...
longer than the ones i use to see...=))
the indecision between the loneliness in your past and the love you still feel makes it a very intersting read...
i don't see any lost of flow...=)
really nice write :)
*keep going*
isabel

All I can say, simply fantastic, nice!

Very well done ,it was very good.

I luv da flow of poem! 5/5!! it suckz wen u break up wid someone and den u want dem back.. i feel ur pain.. i hope u and ur ex will someday reconcile your love for each other..

Another simple but great poem. I really enjoy the last stanza... Now you're one of my favs.

Awwwz very sad
but it was filled with emotion that i could feel!! it was a great poem!!

<3 i love you silly

Wow this was a really great job at explaining how different he is. Well great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

The story you told was easy to understand and follow along too. I feel as if I know you from reading your work and this one was just a joy to read even thought the topic was sad, I think you wrote it well. *5/5*