That was beautiful and touching. :]
it was an attention grabber from start to finish.
great write. 5/5.

I liked it.. It does keep your attention,there's no lie in that. I think that it is a sweet poem and it has some nice delicate views and emotions in it. good job keep writting

I really liike this one!!! and i can relate to it 100% lol....although you had a typing error lol u just for got one thing on the end of the word....

My eyes cry with your though

you forgot the t at the end of it!!! but very niice work 5/5

I know how you feel

I THOUGHT I WAS UR ONE AND ONLY LOVE? =[

Great write!
i loved it everyone knows what that kind of love feels like. i love thhis one i give it a 5/5

hell

Very good poetry.. I really like it when you said....

You are in my mind at every thought
You are in my heart at every beat...
You are in my soul at every breath
You are in my eyes at every delusion...

it mirrored many of the thoughts and feelings I have for another I won't mention ;)

Wow, this one was sad yet beautiful and amazing. Deep poem, I love it. 5/5

I love the way you used the word yearn, I can feel the crave and the love your feeling. 5/5, this is the best i've read throughout your poems!

Very strong and powerful writing..
great job :)
5/5 plz return the favor
Bautiful son by the way..

I like this it is sweet and powerful. plz do reead some of my poems i would appreciate it. :)5\5

Woow this is a reallt buitifull poem i just read. keep it up 5/5 kasia

Wow.. this poem has a really strong emotion... and flow is great and the read is enjoyable... but the "fallen angel" refers to the devil.. maybe you meant it in a way like someone who has passed on its just that's not the way its supposed to be used

Very well written. i really liked

You are in my soul at every breath
You are in my eyes at every delusion...

Its really easy to relate to and understand. Very powerful words
xx Taegan Emily

Aww..i loved it..sad tho..*tear*..but it was good..5/5

Great poem love the emotion and flow of it makes me think u know but hey when you get a chance take a look at some of my poetry its mostly love but i do my best

This is a really great poem!

Aww that was very touching! but...it was sad... T_T

This poem is sad yet wonderful...I can relate to how u feel...

Anthony is a very lucky guy.

Your verse deserves notice.