Comments : Yours, Untitled Poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Ah,...Change.....The only constant....'-)

    Really good poem, dear....

  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    An interesting take (as always) on the truth and reality of the impermanence in all things. Your poem reminded me of a line from a song which reads 'hold on to nothing and it won't let you down'. Very perceptive and thought provoking.
    Happy New Year.

  • 15 years ago

    by Supertramp

    Perceptive provocative and a splash of bloody good

  • 14 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    Wow. This was amazing. .you portrayed the change in life so well. Very nice.