Oh wow. I hope this girl knows you feel that way about her. This is a really good poem.

I like this poem alot too. I hope you ended up with that girl. You really do have some great talent

Love bites

Verytrue, like the line:Razor near me just in case
My hearts feel like a shoelace
Tighten and twisted

Amazing; this is going to one of my favourites. so creative, emotive and just so expressive.