Pretty good! :)

Wow... I love this. The long lines created truly interesting flow through the whole piece. This is the best friendship poem I've read in a while, with excellently expressed emotions.
Your descriptions are fantastic, so creative and vivid. This piece pulled me in from the first line and kept my attention to the great ending stanza. The first stanza is my favorite one.
Keep up the great work!

My Dear Miss Tammie,
I think I can imagine you writing this. Your somber eyes scanning each line for half-placed metaphors, trying to catch up to what your heart wrote when you weren't looking. You're not sad, you kind of wanna be, but you're not. You're just telling the truth.

Truly touching.

Amazing. It was deep, powerful and held meaning. It said something and spoke to me. The imagery in this piece truly worked for the poem and made it complete. I could feel myself in the poem because you described everything so beautifully. The language you used was just flawlessly perfect. I loved the long lines, you worked it well. *5/5*

I know you said you can't see to write anymore so I wanted to go back in time to where your poetry was blooming and show you that you can write, and you will write like this once again. It takes awhile to brake the block. I just say my muse is lazy lol. This piece, Hun. Just wow. The simplicity poured off the page yet the emotions felt so deep, these two things portrayed a brilliant contrast with each other. Truely wonderful. One thing i've noticed about your poetry you seem to love adjectives just as much as I love metaphors. Each has their own personal favorite technique and I feel like i've found yours. I think you know how much I adore long lines and you've always pulled them off nicely while still keeping the flow in tact. Friendship and love poems, well they don't seem to please me as much as dark and sad, guess that's either because i'm an evil evil person lol or the emotion is just stronger is them. Still with this piece you were on a beautiful level. I nearly loved this piece as much as I love reading dark poems. You kept my attention from start until finish and didn't let me take my mind off your words once. I wish I could pik out a favorite part but I can't as each line were so great in their own way. You have created a beautiful gem here which really sparked my interest. Well done.

5/5 hun. ~Mel