Hey it's not a bad go for someone who's taken such a break from writing. I do think you should probably edit your title first, I think you've got an extra 'is' in there. :P.

Part of me wonders what you could come up with if you added a little more rhythm into it. Not necissarily rhyme, but a pattern of some sort. Maybe challenge yourself with some bigger vocabulary. I don't say this because I don't like your poem, but because I can see (through this write) that you have potential to do something really well.
Good job though. Not really much advice I can give you.

Aw, this is such a sad poem. Seems like you really miss that person. Although, the flow was a bit rocky, but it's still good. Will go on my favs!

.:CiNdY:.

Aw it was so sad but sweet i mean understanding the loss of someone you cared about so much even if it wasn't perfect you made your meaning well known and thats the point right? I loved it 5/5