A Cold Day in Hell

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Dec 26, 2007


I can't wait
till a cold day in hell
we'll play in the snow
and it'll be swell

we'll have a snowball fight
Oh what a sight
and we'll make a snowman
this is my plan

We'll drink hot drinks
and skate on the rinks
Oh what a grand day it'll be
just wait and you'll see

I have thought this through
and it'll be a cold day in hell
when you love me
like I love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by lalalailoveyou

    This poem does remind me of my poem 'bizarro world'.. i like the theme of it, a cold day in hell.. its clever.. im not a big fan of the rhyme scheme you chose though.. the poem itself is good though. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Love the last two lines!! know exactly how you feel!

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Love the last two lines!! know exactly how you feel!

  • 17 years ago

    by JEFF

    Loved it, Kinda funny because if i went to hell and it snowed, it would be the first time i have ever seen snow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Talieka

    This is good.. i like it... =]

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