Comments : Stop

  • 16 years ago

    by El

    I think its a gd poem yer but u say just get over it but it aint that simple. U never really understand cutters unless u r a cutter. Im a cutter n i aint proud of it but its something i live with and it does make me feel better. When you feel really bad pain inside you and u just want it to go away so you cut urself and you cant feel in the inner pain no more. I dont know whether the auther was/is a cutter but when you cut u cant just think ok stop its hard. And people bullyin u or pickin on u for being emotional dont help either

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlie

    Thas a good poem and i agree with you

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Amzing.It's good to see a poem about stopping self harm.Cutting just doesnt make sense.If you're life sucks,try to turn it around or at least find a healthier relese.Beautifully written poem with a great meaning,A 5/5.
    Keep writing,
    Rado

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    This is so good, a lot of people can relate to this. Like I said, you're a very good poet!!!!!!!!! Wow, congrats on that poems cuz everyone love it and felt beautiful true to read this! Don't stop writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    U got a point but u're a little 2 harsh:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    It would be a gr8 song:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    That was a beautiful poem. i totally agree with you.

    great job (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    WOOOOOOW! I LOVE THIS ONE 4REAL I DO TEND TO GET LIKE THIS CAUSE OF FAMILY PROBLEMS BUT MAN THERE SO HARD ON ME..

    I LIKE IT I DONT HURT MY SELF OVER LOVE I HURT MY SELF OVER FAMILY...

    UR MY FAVORTIE PLZ LET ME B ONE OF URS... :) 10/10

  • 16 years ago

    by El

    For a poem about this poem go to...

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1013114

    And it may not be good but it took me lik 5 minutes and I wrote it immedialty after reading this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by El

    And I dont mean it as any ofence to any1 n loads of people may say thats a load of rubbish and thats not true but...IDK

  • I love this im dealing with the same thing im trying to get my friends to stop but its not exactly working....

  • 16 years ago

    by Irene

    GReat!
    finally a reasonable m8!
    5/5 =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Wow, a positive piece that invloves a knife, I never thought I'd see the day, well bloody done, I'm impressed. I liked what was being said, but at the same time, you did seem a little insensitive, with lines like 'So you lost your lover, Just get over it'. I really liked the use of the word 'ain't' in the first line of the third stanza, it made you seem much more down to earth, and gave the piece a much more casul feel. Good work again.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    No offense to no one
    But this has to stop
    I m tired of you losing blood
    Until you finally drop

    ^i really liked this stanza.

    I found it suprising reading it, cause i didn't think that's how the poem was going to go, i thought it would have been different considering the title 'stop'
    and not many people write about not cutting, where is a bit sad.

    but great poem though ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    Some parts of this were a little blunt but it's so true! i totally agree with you and it has a good message to it. you're a great writer, keep it up yo. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by CARRIE AKA CAREBEAR

    That's so sad but it's good