It is awesome

Really powerful poem xx well done xx

This poem was emotional and i can really feel how u feel, i have a poem that has the same message as this one
the flow was good, but i would suggest having stanzas or some spaces between some lines it makes it easier to read
great work
5/5

Oh that was nice thoughts.. and great imagery. perfectly well written 5/5

keep it up!

I cant believe how well i relate to this poem. keep it up it was amazing! but i agree. spaces help a lot. but it was a great poem! :)

Good poem,makes you think